Bugs and things I found in V1.1
Typos:
- Minor Typo in Kuroe's "Headpat" Dialogue
if I remember, she said "Continura" instead of "Continue"
- Minor Typo in Aoi's "Small Talk" Dialogue choice options
Something about "To be friend" which isn't grammatically correct.
- Minor Typo in Aoi's Wikipage.
came from the sea with a heavt -
- Minor Typo in Serafi's "Posture" Dialogue
The word vert in her.. second sentence I think it was?
- Minor Typo in Momo's Introduction Dialogue
(Though this one is more of a personal nitpick)
The word "But" cannot follow after a period.
the correct formulation of the sentence would be;
"Kinda tragic y'know, but also funny as fuck"
- Minor Typo in Momo's "New Guidelines" Dialogue
Discrimantion should be Discrimination
- Two Minors Typo in Kuroe's "Dog Leash" Background story dialogue
(Another personal nitpick)
The word "And" cannot follow after a period and missing the word "I" in the same sentence, the correct formulation of the sentence would be;
"But I got used to it, and well.. I guess it's a useful skill now."
- Minor Typo? in Yuki's "Song Practice" Dialogue
I can't tell if it was meant to be Practice or Practise,
Practice is US EN and Practise is UK EN.
- Minor Typo in Momo's "Serious-looking" Dialogue
This one is also more of a personal nitpick, "Sup" is meant to be written " Sup' " as it's an abbreviation of
"What's Up"
- Minor Typo in Momo's "Desk Cat" Dialogue
You forgot the word "be" in "Better be quick"
- Minor Typo in Yuki's "Help with Confidence" Dialogue
Immidately should be Immediately
- Minor Typo in Yuki's "Help with confidence" Pt2 Dialogue
The "i" in "i love you" should be uppercase.
- Minor Typo in Yuki's "Give Warm Gloves" Dialogue
"It's" should be "It" in "It's probably looks stupid" >
"It probably looks stupid"
^ Additionally it's in the wrong choice option box, Unlike Kuroe's Story which is in "Talk", Yuki's is in "Do"
- Minor Typo in Aoi's "Psychology study" Dialogue;
I could chalk this up to her not understanding grammar but "I wanted to ask if you wish to come" is.. interesting wording as she's asking if the player already wanted to go to her room, It should be "If you can" if she's asking for a favor.
- Two Minor Typos in Yuki's "New Plush" Dialogue
"Reallyt" and it should be "the Company's budget"
- Minor Typo in Serafi's "Doing good job" Dialogue
it should be "Doing a good job"
- Minor Typo? in Momo's "Poke poke" Dialogue
"And if I Will grab your hand" just doesn't sound right,
I think "And what if I grab your hand?" sounds a bit better.
- Minor Typo in Momo's "Bored as hell" Dialogue
"I Bored as hell" should be "I'm bored as hell" or
"I am bored as hell"
- Item Menu Animated Arrow Graphic going off-screen
- You can find the same figurine multiple times while doing work; this does nothing for you.
^ Same with the coffee cup.
- The Middle column of text chats that appear during the stream minigame are offset to the left by ONE pixel in reference to the pre-existing chat messages.
- Pressing "New Game" just loads the current save; the only way for you to actually restart and run a new save is to manually delete the save-file inside of the Appdata folder.
- Upon failing the final interaction with Aoi's relationship dialogues, the option to learn with her will be locked and once you unlock the ability to enter her room after having failed her final interaction; you will be given the ability to view the scene instead of entering the dialogue.
However once you exit the scene, the Pt2 of the dialogue will follow.
Here are some things that I just find odd or things I'd personally like to be changed or worked on.
Due to how Dialogue works after maxing out someone's relationship status, having only 3 variations can be kind of boring after some time, especially when you get the same piece of dialogue twice in a row.
Momo's "Bored as hell" Dialogue's choice options don't seem to follow the pattern that the previous ones do as she's not really being "bitchy"
I also found it quite interesting that you can pet the Idols Anywhere, and I mean anywhere.
And they just, accept it :3
Aoi's "Manager Manager" Gave me thousand-yard stare flashbacks to Lobotomy Corporation xd
Please let us hug Kuroe, She deserves a few hugs :3
The new update is really nice though, I love all the new artsies~
Though something I can recommend is making the codes a little less easy to brute-force, I know I have access to them and all but some of them feel a bit too straightforward.