the art in this game is fantastic! I adore his design (i saw him and immediately had to play, he's so pretty) and character in general ❤️. the writing for him feels so realistic and the little hints to his obsession are so good!! they're the perfect level of "weird" without making it super obvious that he's a yandere so it made the build up to the final scene in the demo really intriguing. one of my favorite demos I've played honestly. i'm really happy to see a vn looking at how and why a yandere is the way they are. super excited for the future chapters and to learn more about him !!
(also realized after playing that this is your first writing project??! omg INCREDIBLE work, you should be proud!!!)
edit: forgot to add this, but my keyboard rollback for the dialogue wasn't working. Not sure if anyone else experienced this problem or if it was just my laptop not working, so i figured I'd point it out just in case ^^