Thank you for the feedback, English isn't my first language, so sorry for the grammar issues , I'll fix that grammar asap and yes i upload it already in f95, idk you guys spot some grammar issue i mean it look normal to me and some don't find problem also which part is it?
about the mc i din't plan it well his backstory about his sisters cuz i just summarize his back story so soo...
And also in pauses I add them to guide emotional reading (hesitation, feeling). It's early development and visuals are my main focus, but I'll keep fixing the text. Really appreciate your support — more improvements coming soon!
In minigame i did that on purpose the text minigame so its rush work unlike other that take time to finish so yeah
You can join my discord server i wanna discuss this with you further!.. Thankssss