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FVN批评兽人视觉小说极限创作挑战赛#0——言语肇始
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杀死我的队长
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EBTPROJECT
2 days ago
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需要一定阅读水平,且感觉很多地方的过渡不太流畅,很多地方地方需要暂停下来细品,剧情确实有很多需要被优化。