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I liked this book, even if it wasn't as lewd as your newer works, and the graphics were also of a higher quality, to the point I'm somewhat saddened that there doesn't seem to be another similar game aside from hungry dungeons. Though I have to ask;
Is the star eater even that bad of a guy? If you go through the cursed(?) door, Sepia becomes trapped in her book; a permanent resident...yeah there's the whole stuff about miracles, and she seems to be happy with Mello, but to spend eternity in an unchanging childhood book, looping again and again, her parents probably wondering what happened to her, never to realize her goal to become a writer, as an adult, instead doing who knows what...? And yet the Star Eater appeared before her in the edge between dream and reality to give her the opportunity to break the cycle and make things right, which surely meant getting beaten up again so she could return to the real world and chase her dreams, and make miracles happen in the real world. I'm actually kind of curious about this world~