Game's pretty decent for a first time game for sure and it has a decent storytelling for the 3 pages you have in the game. I would seriously think about going the escape room route if you want to do a logic based game or focus on a story based horror game with some mild puzzles if you want to go that route. Other then that, congrats on your first game.
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