Thank you very much for your analyze! I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the demo.
I'm also grateful that you mentionned the parts who felt disrupting to you. I had specific intentions when writing them; to slow down a bit the events in the story and to emphasize some aspects of Turquoise and The Player (mostly how they perceive each other). Maybe I went a bit overboard. I understand if that doesn't work out for you. I will work on trying to balance the game better in the future!
Thank you for taking your time to write such a long comment! ✨