Hi pclma! =)
The demo is truly impressive. I was completely captivated from beginning to end. Turquoise is such an endearing character, with just a hint of suspicion, which is exactly why we love him so much, hehe. He has that yandere charm that makes him even more fascinating.
I also found the main character very touching. Their story is intriguing, and although their past is quite sad, they do not let it define them. I found that really refreshing and meaningful.
The art is absolutely beautiful. Whether it is Turquoise’s sprites, the backgrounds, or the CGs, everything looks stunning and carefully crafted.
The dynamic between the main character and Turquoise is also wonderful. I really appreciate that the main character sometimes takes the initiative and is open and expressive. It adds a lovely balance to their relationship.
There is just one small point I would like to mention. The scenes in the apartment, especially the cooking moment and the card game with Turquoise, felt a bit too detailed to me. It slightly disrupted the pacing of the demo and made those parts feel a little long, which created a small imbalance in the overall rhythm.
Aside from that detail, I truly want to emphasize how excellent the demo is. I am really looking forward to discovering what happens next and seeing how far Turquoise will go for us, even though the final scene already suggests he has gone quite far, hehe.
Thank you so much for this beautiful work, for the writing, the programming, and the art. And thank you as well for not using any AI. It makes the experience feel even more special! <3