Wow.
This is one of the strongest demo's I have seen and I am absolutely baffled it is your first writing project.
I am (no pun intended) absolutely obsessed with the visuals ((immediately upon opening the game and seeing the main menu art, I knew it was going to be fantastic)) and how well this was written - I ADORE the detail of his eyes and the usage.
I am super excited to be following along as chapters release. Brilliant all around, thank you for posting. ^^