I played both the demo and the 0.1 versions. And I'm liking what I'm seeing. To the point I was disappointed how short they both were.
And for a non native English speaker, you did a good job with the English text. I only noticed a couple words that were off (director instead of principal and Jesus Raptor instead of Raptor Jesus), and one line that was in Spanish in the 0.1 version.
The only criticisms I can think of are I wish the MC had a proper name instead of Noebody and definitely change the photo with a filter background to drawn backgrounds in the demo version when you can.
I"m looking forward the development of this VN.