I like most of the game so far but I have huge issues with your portrayal of BDSM and Mrs. Mills inadequate regard for the wellbeing of her sub. She starts off okay when she makes a safeword but completely ignores the mc and says she doesn't carw when he says his left leg is uncomfortable and gags him so he can't use the safeword she really should have established atleast some form of nonverbal communication like hand signals so he could still signal her to stop while gagged if she crosses a line. Also there was no aftercare. It was a very bad portrayal of a healthy bdsm relationship if you're doing it right the doms power is an illusion and the sub always gets the final say and is always able to communicate their discomfort and end it at any time.