I don't know why I have the feeling that it's unfinished. I don't just say this because it looks like a sketch, but also because I don't think the story has a good ending. I think it should be explored more, since I see that it could be a good story
it is unfinished. Did i forget to mention that? im sorry i couldnt make it in time, so i presented what little i did get to draw. its supposed to be 19 pages, i intend to complete it bit by bit
Don't worry, something similar happened to me with my comic (which is finished), so I understand. I'll wait until you finish your comic before giving a conclusion. Good luck! ;)