I got the good ending! I really like the character art and backgrounds, has gentle feel too it, some of the music as well especially battle themes!
I also really like the title cards, very nice addition. The combat is lacking a bit tbh but On His Mind is a good step forward from this foundation found here. I was expecting Miranda to have more powerful moves, from how she was shown in the story, I eneded up pretty much just attacking with lynn the most of the time.
Story generally is told pretty good, I do think the start comes across as a bit rushed but the rest of it is paced well and the development of their relationship is told excellently.
Good Job : )