This is nice, I like the amount of customization. I chuckled at her mentioning not wearing her clothes that you picked since that's exactly the thought I had :) Also dying when you run a red light is quite funny.
I don't necessarily think the complaints about the music are because of the composition it might just be because of the samples you used, the slightly out of tune notes with the long reverb might make any song a bit creepy, so maybe see how it sounds with different samples. You could also lean into it and make the rest of the game also eerie, that could be interesting.
The shopping minigame is surprisingly fun, I collected ALL the food because it took me a bit to see you can just move on. You also might want to add/change some food items since there is quite an interesting selection, there are plain instant noodles, rice and patties but not a lot that would go well with each of them. Maybe you could also add recipes to choose from and then you have to collect only the ingredients you need and some snacks.
People already talked about the car speed, so I will just add that the bakery could maybe afford a new sign.
Overall good job on the game though.