I 100% just downloaded yours instead of Soundcloud because I knew you put in a loooot of work on getting a really clean solid mix, with all of the careful sidechaining technique and automation.
One thing - not even a nitpick, but more of a creative idea, would be to spatialize some of the bitcrushing near and far, rather than what sounds like just left to right, by increasing stereo width and automating reverb wetness with the send signal to the reverb track.
Overall, really though, yours is incredibly well mixed, one of the cleanest, clearest tracks I've heard.
I think it still maybe has a few too many elements. Next jam I'm intentionally making things more focused on composition, because I think I also kind of fell into the trap of overworking the mix at the expense of writing more music.
I think my goal is also to try to simplify my approach in the sense of often when one is new at something, you can kind of overdo it and get lost in the mix of techniques without taking a step back and seeing the big picture, which I did in mine big time.
That said, the composition is solid and interesting. Maybe I should make a minimalist theme...
Great fricking work though, seriously. My critique is truly just to help you take things to that next level.