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So, I died at the first choice for choosing “incorrectly”. When the “wrong” choice wasn’t even in any way unkind; if anything, I chose it because I did not want to flirt with this random woman I at that point knew nothing about beyond that my character knew her from before. I didn’t want to be creepy. As a result, I just … got stabbed.

I know this is a jam game, but that is not good storytelling.

I know I should shrug, pick the other choice, and move on. But the speech is so painfully slow that it makes me feel like the narrator believes blind people are stupid and also can’t understand normal speech. I know it is unintentional, but in a game about manners, I somehow feel like I am being made fun of.

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Hello Mayana! Thank you for playing and getting one of the ends. So sorry you didn't like it but I appreciate your honesty. Yess! I know that the speech needs a lot of improvement, we are not english speaker and we were afraid that with our accent the story could be not understable. We'd like to think that this is the first step for something better and with more options. We're sorry to hear you feel inconfortable with the first choice, "the bad manners" in this case is because the wrong option is a lie, but yeah we need to polish that.