The art style of this game is really unique and interesting, I'm impressed. And the added languages are a thing I wasn't expecting from a 5 days long game jam. Nice work! I have to say the minigames are better played on full screen, and mostly straightforward, but I'll add a couple of things I noticed:
- The apple collecting game is a bit frustrating to play since it's not at all easy to send the fairy to collect apples falling on the other side of the screen. The fairy it's either too slow, or the apple is too fast, or both, I guess. But I do think the "click to go there" feature is nice.
- The eggs minigame is difficult to play in the small screen version because the eggs are so small, but going full screen is ok. I did notice thought that if the eggs slightly overlap they get picked up together. It's not a very big problem since you can just leave those there and fill the baskets with the other eggs, though.
- The mole minigame has a bit of the same problem of the egg one when played on a smaller screen. I find it's a bit difficult to keep track of all the moles on screen and go from one to the other when I don't have an instataneous feedback that tells me the mole has been successfully bonked in the head and I don't have to worry about it anymore. Maybe a sound effect would be useful?
And the music is another thing xD What a soundtrack! I wasn't expecting it and it was fun.
I hope my feedback is useful for the second part of the jam :)
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Hello! Thank you for playing our little game!
We will make the apple game more engaging by making the fairy more fast, making the elements a little bigger and adding sounds.
For the mole minigame we will add some sounds and make them bigger.
In general, we will make the instructions for each game more clear!
Thank you for consider the multiple language support. It’s an extra work but it is always rewarding! The trick is doing it right from the start, so you get multiple languages without much frustation later.
And also thank you for your words about the music. I also think that our musician did a great work!!