I see there have been some big changes to the story, and most of them were for the better, since there wasn't much backstory about the reflection or its purpose.
I also appreciate that you're giving the main character progressive development because of Guy, and he may have to confront certain issues from his past.
While there aren't many visual changes, you've clearly tried to focus more on the story, and some grammar corrections will help readers understand it better.
That's all I can say for now in chapter 1.
I hope to see you soon, Tavios! ❤️