Well, what can I say about this FVN?
Here's my opinion on what I read, and I can say that I loved it!
I'm not that into lesbian romance, so I was nervous that it wouldn't grab my attention enough, but it was the opposite.
The way the story introduces us is like those typical children's stories that one might have read or seen as a child, and that, combined with the soundtrack, brings back those nostalgic childhood moments which is a good and strong point.
The characters are also very noteworthy, although I wish there were a few more besides the two main ones, but at least they fulfill their objective role in the story.
The romance is also sweet and makes you empathize with both protagonists, which is a crucial point for a reader to get hooked, and I must say you did a great job.
Keep it up and congrats for the launch of your first visual novel! 😁