This was really well done overall. I enjoyed the slice of life feel and liked exploring the area you crafted. The full screen portrait of the character on the beach was amazing. The only part I could see improving would be the transition from the train station to the grandparent's house, a screen between the two to mark that transition a little more clearly might have helped a bit. It took a moment to realize exiting the house would bring me somewhere new and not just back to the station.