I was not prepared for that final paragraph of the opening. If I had been drinking I would have definitely did a spit take. The character writing was pretty solid and there was little moments that got me chuckle (or wince at how painfully real they were. That "I heard she did something problematic", had to close my eyes for a second there. Really how it be). I rather like that the golfing aspect was made casual rather than punishing. I did think level 8 represented a very sharp spike in difficulty having to pull off a little rebound shot.
I look forward to the world being able to enjoy kegel golf in peace and harmony. RIP moon tho...