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Game's current state is really good! I love the character designs and their personalities are quite enjoyable aswell, though I do have some critique..


- The Choice options in turn for the character's responses feel inconsistent, what I mean is that the pattern of how you should respond to (mainly just Kuroe) feels inconsistent;
You get to understand a rough basis but sometimes she behaves completely off, however that may just be how I interpret the messaging of the choice options,

- Difficulty is all-over the place, probably because it's tied to RNG however the main difficulty is the interaction boxes being able to overlap making you accidentally able to click two interaction boxes at the same time, this sucks especially if the two interaction boxes are Red and Green respectively; 

Additionally it feels really weird for the goobers to have a flooded chat right off-the-bat, It would make sense for the difficulty to be incremental, slowly getting harder as the streamers gain more total followers.

- Upgrades feel useless, in the current state of the game, upgrades basically do nothing; additionally they contain misinformation, this could just be fixed with a small developer note saying something like;
"Does nothing at the moment, Sorry"
..Also what's the difference between "Score" and "Subscribers"? There's not even such a thing in the minigame-

Suggestions;

- Allow for longer streams; At the cost of consuming energy allow the player and the streamer to go live for longer because well.. It's a little odd to just boot up stream for just an hour, especially if you're quite popular.

- Add some flavor text during the streams, something to just spice stuff up like a stream topic or something; just for fun as it's kinda weird for the streamer to just be staring at the camera for an entire hour.

Final Notes;

- The art direction is amazing, major props to whoever did the art; I love it.

- At first I thought Kuroe was a guy until I read her wikipage xd (Might just because Kuroe is really frickin' cute and I'm more into guys so my brain just jumped to conclusions, no offense to her though, she's still adorable and would.)

But yeah, keep going man; this game will be one I'll really look forward to!

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Oh and also please add a way to pause the game; because I don't think there really is a way aside from exiting back to main menu?

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Thank you SO MUCH for such a long and explanatory post, I will make sure to work on these! This little game is still very junky, so it makes life much easier with posts like this.
If there's something I can add at the moment:


- Yeah, the writing is pretty incosistent, there's not really an excuse, I'm just an inexperienced writer. But I will work on it more and rewrite them over time.


- The upgrades, I think they do work, it's just they can be too weak to make a noticable difference (gonna tweak it a bit), +there's no VFX to show their effect in this version.

(Also yes, I will change the descriptions to be more clear)


- IM SORRY YES THE PAUSE BUTTON WILL BE THERE, GAME MAKER JUST DECIDED TO COUGH AND NOT ACCEPT IT IN ANY WAY, APOLOGIES

Everything else is noted to work on, again, thank you for your post and enjoying the game! :D 

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Also let us hug Kuroe, Just for affection's sake; also because I wanna see her reaction to a genuine hug.

I think that allowing us to enter their room for a small chat instead of heading straight to their "scene" would be much better, letting us talk to them and get to know them a little better, it would play a little more into the "Dating Sim" aspect of the game;

It would be really fun to learn more about the character's backgrounds and daily life aside from the tiny sprinkles from conversation and the wiki page,
Of course; not like they'll spill it immediately, I think it should be every now and then they could have a little heart to heart as they get more comfortable with the player; 

(P.S; Could you add a little bit of brat-taming as an optional route for Kuroe? I just wanna make her mine and protect her and make her feel safe since not everyone is into her kink)