Hi! I've read everything available. I'm eagerly awaiting the rest. Good job!
I just have one impression that keeps bothering me. The protagonist and his partner are presented as the best agents of an elite unit of bounty hunters. However, their dialogues and actions mainly reveal incompetence, uncertainty, lack of knowledge, and a lack of the manner of operation characteristic of a trained representative of the services. I find it difficult to identify with characters who are so inconsistent.