I think you have a good concept here, and it's clear what your intention is for the song's feel with the drum part. It's hard to tell what key the song is in, though. At 0:07 there's a low note there that I think would be fitting for your root note to repeat and work around, if that makes sense. The part from 0:06-0:12 is solid but if you leave that low note by itself as the bass and bring the other notes to a higher octave that dissonance could work better. Then just repeat that phrase a few times and you have a solid song. I like the ambience you are going for though, and definitely keep at writing!
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I thought the drums sounded perfect, but then who wants to listen to only drums for a submission? I tried to do well with the Lead & Flute, but to me, it seems like the flute could've been better. Also, I'm surprised that you found this as ambience... I'm probably too much of an ambient artist myself LOL. (I was more aiming for borderline intense-like music rather than ambience)