Nice job getting a full project finished, especially for a first game. That is already a big accomplishment in a game jam.
I liked the visual style at the beginning. The simple geometric aesthetic reminded me a bit of Thomas Was Alone, which gave it a clean and recognizable look. The dream concept also fits the theme nicely since dreams are naturally full of strange places.
Where I got a bit stuck was progression. After reaching the white scene the game kept restarting for me and I wasn’t sure what I was supposed to do next or if that was the intended loop. Because of that I wasn’t able to move further through the experience.
The premise itself seems interesting, but a little more direction for the player would help. Some dialogue, prompts, or environmental cues explaining what the player should be doing could make the progression clearer.
Overall though, nice work getting your first project completed and submitted to the jam. Finishing a game is the hardest part.
If you get a chance during the rating period, feel free to check out our game as well. We'd love to hear what you think.