feedback focusing on the things that got me confused. the idea makes a lot of sense, and I think will be very beneficial. I think many people do have this understanding of a healthy vs sick egregore; but they've put it together each from a different eclectic group of sources, which often makes communication and research very difficult. your proposal, if I understand correctly, will make it feasible to actually do collective research, communicate it, and make progress in this field.
- I'm a little unclear on why "Write the founding translation documents — "connecting current psychological schools and treatments to the new paradigm, showing how CBT, psychoanalysis, behavioral, humanistic, and systems approaches each capture part of the picture and how the framework unifies them" is so important. Your list of "What's in place" feels much more like what needs to be connected. (I'd add aspects of sociology, anthropology, political science/philosophy and educational design as being part of that list too.)
- I'm also unsure why your practitioner looks the way they do. They sound awesome and hyper-virtuous, but I don't see why that's the bar. Isn't it enough to understand the mechanisms of how societies are healthy and sick and know how to pull the lever? I'm not sure this is more like a psychologist than a wise legislator. If anything the skills involved will probably need to be much more intellectually rigorous. The researchers might need some of these virtues (plus super-duper-communication + formalization skills) in order to create the curriculum from which practitioners emerge. Kind of how you need to be a certain kind of mind to discover electricity, and a different kind to be an electrical engineer.
- Back to the first point, I'm unsure why psychology is your main analogy. It seems to me it is because your next steps have quite a lot to do with psychology as a field needing to be upgraded to health of societies. My guess is that politicians, priests, and other people in power over organizations are actually the target audience. I would want to teach them what is going on, as they already have some levers in their hand. Individual psychs typically don't as far as I know. Even Rogerian T-groups and the like aren't really a society to be healed.