Intro was promising, but the drop was really junky. Too much dissonance, you should stick to a key because otherwise it’s not very pleasant to listen to. I wish it was longer as well. The master is fine, but the mixing can get a few touches here and there. I assume this is a gen 1 song, so I am not going to add that there’s not much going on in terms of varying instruments. Try again, I see the vision. :-)