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This is excellently done! I am lost for words. The art is already stunning with that beautiful hand-drawn graphic. The quality of the artwork extends throughout the whole game, and there's even a bonus screen too! The story is amazing as well. I've been expecting it to have a darker turn midway through the game, and I was still stunned by the final puzzle. I loved how you incorporated the puzzles as a form of storytelling as well, it makes everything made so much sense and ultimately extremely enjoyable. Well done! Btw, the game reminds me of A Little to the Left a lot with that flower puzzle. Loved that game a lot!

Other things I like:

  • How the world subtle change after each puzzle
  • Eerie music that doesn't make sense at first, but is actually perfect for the game
  • Loads of puzzles

Suggestions:

  • The hitbox for the puzzle pieces might need to be bigger, as currently it's a bit hard to pick up a piece quickly without precise mouse controls
  • The final puzzle would be better if the paper edges were a bit more uneven, so that it wouldn't rely on guessing where the pieces should go. All looks too rectangular right now

Thank you, thank you! I'm so glad you liked how it all came together. I think it's what we are most happy with as well, that all the parts came together like we hoped to make a "bigger whole" :)

I like your suggestions too. We will fix hitboxes for a finished/polished version in not too long.