Thank you! I'm glad you noticed the "show, don't tell" introduction as I was quite proud of that. The umbrella was definitely a more lighthearted fix to a problem that arose from laziness so I'm happy you got a laugh out of it!
Thanks for the criticism too! I'll probably remake this after the jam at some point with all the suggestions and critiques I've gotten. I likely won't rush into it since I'd like to get more knowledge and experience first though.