Pretty plain text document, which is actually really appealing for me as a visually impaired person. I found this very easy to read and digest. I think adding a little visual flair in the way of more distinct headings and indication of NPCs (maybe bold their names?) would elevate this.
This is really bare bones, leaving a lot of room for the GM. That's not a bad thing, but I found myself wishing for more elaboration on what Rose could do as a Fempanion-- maybe statblocks for her and the other NPCs?
I also found myself a little lost with the lack of clear setting; a little more detail for that as well as potential events stemming from the complications might be helpful. Mostly I think this needs some fleshing out-- give GMs a little more work with, but still leave room for them to play.
Otherwise, you've got a decent start here. (:
This works well as a cyberpunk mission! It's got rogue androids, people in power with dubious motives...visually it is a bit bland, so my advice here is add some color and some intentional layout/formatting for your text. Maybe since this is about an android, your color scheme could be silver and some shade of pink? Just a thought.
Suggestions:
- keep a plain text version!
- add some distinct visual flair to your text (make headings stand out, bold NPC names?)
- elaboration on your NPCs (more details about who they are; what they can do; statblocks?), and your setting; give the GM a bit more to work with
- add some color and layout with intention!