This was a great game. It was so beautiful and calming. Although that last platforming bit was way too hard (I had to get help to do it). The story was also interesting. I would love to see a longer game made from this. I think it would be so cool! The music in the title screen is beautiful and the sounds throughout the whole game was quite calming. The only critique I would give is that the bird ambience didn't loop properly and the text was a bit slow. I think the slow text works really well in the beginning to set the tone, but it gets a tiny bit annoying as it goes on, especially when it sometimes prevents you from moving. But its not too big of a deal since the game is pretty short. Overall, this was a great little experience!