I've barely finished the intro, but I had to come by and express my delight at this writing. The banter between characters is absolutely magical. The script could do with an editing pass for typos and such, but the core content is some of the best I've read. Just wanted to put that out there.
I will literally cry, thank you 🥺👉🏻👈🏻
You'll love version 1.2. The banter I wrote for scenes there is basically upgraded version of what I have now. And it's coming soon!
About typos:
Usually before every version my friend does a huge proofread and fixes most of the typos she finds, since I'am completely awful at this. But even she can't find them all so I collect the ones players find and fix them all in new updates.