For a first game, this is very good! The dialogue was pretty charming, and the environments were very nice to look at. The timer was a bit strict, but I was able to talk to everyone in two runs. Great job, and I hope you go on to make more games!
Yeah, I really chose to make it shorter since I wanted everyone to have to do multiple runs in order to try different dialogue journeys as well. But yeah, thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it!