I think this looks cool and sounds good but it is too hard for me to get into.
Having limited jumps is a unique mechanic. Perhapsf or each section before you get to the light it might be better if you had 1 more life than you needed to give more wiggle room.
I think this game could be pretty good with the difficulty toned down just a little and can always have a difficulty option if you were set on making a difficult game.
For me I couldn't get to the second light and I tried 5 or so times which is enough for me to put something down.