I can't stop winning!!!! (or there is a bug in casino and you can't lose money)
Now let's get more serious. As a demo for the game, I really enjoyed it.
It was annoying try to see all dialog options but it's more problem with lack of a long-term goals. After affinity 12 you don't have to do anything. But that's understandable. This game is for jam. And this is simply a problem of lack of time.
I love game management, and you've made a pretty good prototype. All the information is on the screen, so I don't have to go into separate menu to see important information.
I really want to see the finished version of the game if you decide to pursue its development. With more mechanics and not temporary art.
Oh and some more bugs:
At the end of the week, it seems like you don't lose your money on rent.
If someone is in a place, this place cannot close. (The pool is open until 10:00 pm) (But this is most likely your failsafe)