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WOW that ending made my jaw drop!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE your writing oh my god, it's some of the best writing I've seen in a visual novel so far with how lowkey Kien is and then blowing us away with that reveal. I mean, I had an inkling that it *could* be the case, but with the way it was written it was easy to excuse away or dismiss, like the red flags were blended in so well !!!
Kien is SO charming omfg, the way you drew him (and how neat his apartment is omfg) he looks so sweet and unassuming and respectful, I would've easily believed him without question. Good on Sallie for actually calling the locksmith at the end (I wouldn't have even thought to do that ;-; bestie is smarter than me). The AUDACITY of this handsome man to call himself sallie's boyfriend and cancel on the locksmith when they hadn't even gone on a proper date yet OOOOOhh he's so manipulative >:( but I can't hate him XD
I was ROOOTING for Sallie when she choked him out at the end like yESSSS FINALLY AN MC WHO CAN KICK ASS !!!! It got me so hyped to see that!!! Then to see Kien break character at the very end was so satisfying.
AHHH I'm so so SO excited for the part 2 of this game (which I saw you announced on your Tumblr!!!). I would love to see more of these characters!! I have so many questions!!! What does it mean that Kien has that super rare doll with him as well? Did he meet Sallie in the past?? Why is he obsessed with her? Did he move in a month ago while he was stalking her? When did he get the chance to be able to break in to her apartment and copy her keys??? (bc the lock is good, he couldnt have broken in any other way other than copying her keys somehow but HOW AND WHEN??)
Dear dev, please don't ever stop making games and writing/creating!! You have so much talent and I would love to see more from you :D I hope you have a wonderful day!