I like the writing. It has a really cool concept. I am not a huge fan of combat in TTRPGs. My favorite is Mausritter. It is my impression your system has a focus on combat. Your examples mostly involve combat which is fine. I am just letting you know this was not made for me. When I read the introduction my first thought was "Oh I am a warlock". There are differences between this game and being a warlock with an evil patron, but it has a very warlock feel to me. This was clearly made for people who have played games like DnD. This feels like a warlock subclass. I mean that in the beast way. It can be hard to convey tone in writing like this I assure you I have a positive tone. l like warlocks. This is very cool. Personally I would have liked to see more of a focus on non combat skills, but that is a me problem.