Great job! You asked for feedback on the artsyle, it works quite well in my opinion for the setting and story you told. It's a very cozy style, and it helped elevate the mood. I'm not sure how much the CRT effect added, though.
Other general feedback: As others have mentioned, it is quite slow. Expect that in a jam setting, people will give your game 3-7 minutes unless they're very engaged, so allow them to take the game at their own pace rather than forcing a strict timeline. Focusing on the cinematic and cutscenes is good, but make sure to not leave the gameplay behind.
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Thank you, glad you like it. Yeah, the CRT probably doesn't add much, mostly I just wanted it to be darker for cutscenes. This was my first story-based game, and yeah, I focused a little too much on the cutscenes. I am going to work on the game more after the voting period is over, I'll be releasing an updated version. Thanks for the feedback, it's very much appreciated! Thank you for playing!