Hey!
I like the interpretation of the theme!
It's a pretty good submition for a first, well done.
The game is fun, art is custom wich I like a lot, the writing is good.
I would have loved it if the game was longer but I can see that producing more character can be hard for a solo dev.
I would have loved some kind of feedback, knowing if i'm doing good. I tested making wistakes and it felt abrupt but I guess I had my feeback ^^
Keep making games it's really encouraging
Cheers