Playability:
Overall a fun little shop builder and enjoyable to optimize and play through. Text effects make things a bit hard to read due to the letters being so large at first. Got negative reviews on the first level despite having a proper checkout line because it was "too slow" with one customer so there might need to be a bit of balance review.
Theme:
The theme isn't very strong on this one but that's ok. Viewers feels like a bit of an afterthought and don't seem to heavily tie to gameplay. Might be missing something on this but I would love to see the theme tied in more heavily.
Cleverness:
Making a grid builder with dynamic NPC pathing in this amount of time isn't easy so nice work on that. Would love to see more options on buildings going forward.
Artistic Style:
Nice parallax effect on the main menu. Simple and consistent art throughout. Nothing wrong here at all. Nice work!