Great job in making something visually beautiful. I can relate to the storyline in that its tough out here right after school lol. I did notice a few typos, and I think adding punctuation would've helped with the readability and some extra umph for emotion. Also, maybe some SFX for some scenes would've been nice, like a rustling paper sound as the main character opened their letter. Choices would be a great next step for you as you continue your game dev journey. Overall, great job and stick with it!