Great idea! Although I didn't feel like the player movement had enough polish, mostly coming from the fact that all platforms were pass-through, which i felt was not properly communicated to the player. Also, the audio recordings felt a bit cheap and out of place, and the entire setting felt almost like a scratch game.
Sorry if i sound harsch, but I really feel like the game would've worked a lot better with some more polish. But the initial idea is still great!