Nice work, I like the premise for this story, the rebirth concept works well for this format. I like the information log system as well, that's a nice way to add word building. I think the story overall is very strong, but some of the writing could be more succinct, for example this sentence:
As you walk down the hallway adjacent from the main courtyard, you pay attention to the different rooms, different labratories and different stations that these different employees conduct their work.
This uses the word "different" four times, which seems unnecessary. I think a second pass of editing to clean up sections like this would help a lot.