This is an interesting approach, I appreciate the ambition of creating a system for tracking resources, but it's unclear if the resources have an effect on the story, it seems like the story progresses the same way regardless of how you allocate resources. When the system isn't clear, it sort of becomes a distraction, so I don't think it makes sense here, though I think it's good to try out concepts like this in these projects. The writing could use some polishing, I could follow most of it, but there are some passages where the grammar and spelling creates confusion, for example:
"Your Terrified you wonder, contemplate what to do you wonder who are these people and want to go back to your own world?"
This could be rewritten more succiently,
You are terrified and wondering who these people are and how to get back to your own world.
The narrative seems to jump pretty abruptly between different styles, settings and characters, so it's a bit hard to follow. I would try to simplify things so there's only one or two new elements introduced in each passage.