Hi! First, thank you very much for playing Sucker Punch and even more for the kind and thoughtful review you posted. I'm not trying to offer false flattery, but you seem to be the exact audience this story is written for - I'm glad you found it and are enjoying it.
If I may ask, how did you discover it? (Itch.io and I haven't been on good terms).
I will be addressing the text/visuals issue in the next release(s), thank you for the suggestion.