This game is actually awesome. I beat it in around 40 minutes, but ironically half of that was spent on the first level just trying to figure out the controls. I would say they were confusing but near the end they actually started to click and the platforming was pretty fun. I actually like that sort of "learning to ride a bike" feeling so no complaints there. The progression was handled really well and the "contextualization" with the story made each level (including the 3rd) actually feel like a logical progression.
Your voice acting was super fun and was the main reason I kept playing after the first level. The intro to level 2 got me hyped to see the end. The levels each had a distinct (strange?!?!) feel and giving the later levels unique gameplay mechanics helped keep it fresh (the part with the other eggos in level 3 was peak).
If I had any complaints, the music in level 2 got a bit grating after a bit, mostly because it looped too frequently and each "section" wasn't long enough and the constant genre changes built up. All the other songs worked great though and I did like it at first.
This is literally my kind of game, could've been harder. I'm gonna check out your other stuff, Carpal looks pretty cool. Keep up the great work!