This is a good start, I like the theme, it's interesting to put the reader in the world of a professional soccer player. It seems like the user decisions don't really effect the outcome, so it would be good to have more paths with different outcomes, for example, it doesn't matter if I choose "eat" or "game" in the second passage, the story ends up in the same place. I would think about different possible endings and then paths that could the user there.