Nice work, this is a good premise for the story and has some interesting choices, and good endings. One small detail I would work is some of the links are capitalized while others aren't, this seems kind of random, so I'm not sure it's intentional. For example, in the first passage, Marker and Spraycan are capitalized, but in the next passage with Marker, trashbin and home are lowercase. I would use consistent capitalizations. Since the links are a different color, they should already stand out, but using capital letters is another good way to make the choices stand out.