Playability:
Easy to understand controls and a great narrative to go with it. Could do well with some text speed options.
Theme:
Didn't fit the theme super well but it's fine as such. Would like to see this expanded in some way.
Cleverness:
There seems to be a bit of meta-narrative going on with a narrative screw happening from time to time. I personally really enjoy that and want to see where it goes.
Artistic Style:
Simple text adventure.