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This updated whilst I was away but I watched my itch like a hawk and NOW I CAN PLAY AND IT'S EVERYTHING. I did a from scratch replay to absorb it all properly with the character I'd already made and god it's so good. I don't want to just wax poetic and ramble but this IF is so so good. The character writing and story are just incredible, and I'm gonna quote a couple moments because I am feeling oh so many things right now.

Because this moment!? This moment is just so! 

"Inside the closet, two kids pretend that words in a book can build walls thick enough to keep the world out.

Maybe they can.

Maybe they can't.

You keep reading anyway."

My tears are immense and I feel so bad for these BABIES. But that's such an amazing little passage too. So poignant.

"The coffee tastes like it died hours ago and is now haunting the pot" Hysterical. I want that quoted on a fridge magnet.

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Your phone has two unread messages. One from that bartender. One from the CRD agent you definitely shouldn't be sleeping with. Both want to know if you're free tonight.

"Two messages at 6 AM? Wow you're popular," Maud observes, because of course she's watching. She doesn't ask who. Doesn't need to. "Maybe focus on not dying before your next hookup, yeah?"" I imagine this is specific to my guy having the hook ups vice (and Nasir) but I wheezed. It's my incredible charm Maud. I'm just irresistible!

Sorry I'm totally rambling again, I just adore the writing style and the characters so much. I've had Maud and Cipher for ten minutes and I love them dearly.

"Running on spite" Is an expression I absolutely love.
MY GIRL!?! Oh I want to go full rage mode on everyone in Sordia for her but we are calm and peaceful and a very logical society yes. Yes ;) NOPE GOING FERAL. INVOICING YOU FOR EMOTIONAL DAMAGES. Damn tho Maud wasn't kidding that Lux would know when the contract was severed, that sounds painful as hell. And is FURTHER CONFIRMATION THAT SHE'S GONE. *The emphasis is my sobbing*.  10/10
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The fact that you replayed from scratch just to properly absorb everything?? That’s such an incredible compliment 😭

I’m so, so happy the reveal and those moments landed for you. That closet passage was one of those scenes that just sat with me while writing it, so knowing it hit emotionally makes me ridiculously relieved. (I am both sorry for the tears and absolutely not sorry at all.)

“The coffee tastes like it died hours ago…” becoming fridge magnet material is maybe the highest honor I could hope for. (My Mom likes to say something similar, when her coffee does not hit the way she wants it to xD)

And the rage?? The feral energy?? Completely valid. Entirely understandable. We are, of course, a calm and logical society. Obviously. Definitely. (Invoice denied, though. Emotional damage is included in the base experience.)

Thank you for rambling. Please never stop rambling. Comments like this genuinely fuel me to keep writing. 🖤

Thank YOU for sharing with us! I think of the phrase, "hurts so good" in regards to all this. I accept this denied invoice with an affectionate grumble and shove it in the junk drawer (like my feelings, LMAKJSDN I'm kidding I promise). Because I signed up for this roller coaster and by howdy I am going to enjoy every single gut-wrenching minute of it. I'm so glad my long, rambling comment hit so well. I hope you enjoy your (at least at this time, mental image) of the fridge magnet, and I happily await all the future pain that is to come of it. We, the calm, logical society are ready for such chaos! (As if I do not sit, chomping the bars of my enclosure like a beast just waiting to be unleashed).